Sunday, April 15, 2012

Leave held breath and breathe again - A Haiku.


Wipe trickle of sweat
Pop that life changing question
Silent tense moments

Hear your quick heartbeats
She says - "Yes, I'll marry you!"
Sublime emotions

See dreams coming true
Leave held breath and breathe again
Hold hands together

Run around the field
Wind blowing through open hair
Feel joy, feel alive!

Courtesy
This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'ALIVE'.



26 comments:

  1. beautiful.. Cute.. Lovely.. Those subtle emotions, wonderfuly expressed

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  2. Kind of a tale you have weaved.. you are amazing talent.. Pranita..

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  3. well i can't say this is not close to me. I have read it over and over. The marriage acceptance thing, wow. Thanks for that..really. :)

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    1. Hehe...thanks Jayanth! Again...! :)

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  4. Your words made the situation alive for me. Lovely.

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    1. Thanks a lot pal...! M glad if it helped! :)

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    1. Truly... almost everyone's dream life!

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  6. wow you are getting better and better at this

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  7. Wonderful set of haiku! I liked the third one especially:)

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  8. This is very lovely and romantic set....Enjoyed reading it :)

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  9. A breath of freshness from 2 young hearts.Very positive and great haiku!

    Hank

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  10. What a precious story, beautifully expressed and wonderfully alive :)

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