Saturday, April 28, 2012

Shower of rejuvenation - A Haiku.

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Long hot shower waits
Tiresome bad day at work
Thoughts pour, not water

Worries bubble up
Unanswered questions gulped in
Subdued emotions

Water wipes tears
Clarity washes off stress
Rejuvenation






The joy of taking a long hot shower after a tiring day is the best stress-buster known i think, maybe with some soothing music playing. You enter with the load of your worries and problems, only to come out unburdened and feeling light, fresh and rejuvenated! 


This Haiku is written for The Heights of Haiku - April 2012. The prompt for today is 'CLARITY'.


34 comments:

  1. beautiful concept Pranita... needless to say, a lovely set...

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  2. Fresh feeling after reading this..:)

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    1. M glad the fresh waves of my haiku reached u! :)

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  3. Indeed..a good way to destress..and you have painted it well here.

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  4. I enjoyed your haiku. I felt the stress melting away with the arrival of clarity. Well done.

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    1. Thanks Ellecee... m pleased you felt the msg of the haiku :)

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  5. Lovely set of haiku receiving clarity through rejuvenation ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  6. Absolutely wonderful, Pranita!

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  7. A lovely surprise take on the prompt. Bravo.

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    1. M pleased you feel the same way, Valli..! Thanks :)

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  9. Lovely set Pranita! You crafted it really well:)

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  10. A hot shower is good..a bubble bath with a martini is better:)

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    1. A bubble bath is a long-pending wish! :)

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  11. I wonder how you end up your haiku with a cracker everytime!, another brilliant ending :)

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    1. Hehe... thanks JD for ur cracking compliment! :)

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  12. Great write ! Water is certainly a power cleanser of negative energy and very refreshing.

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  13. I completely agree with you...well written... :)

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    1. Clarity comes to most in a shower... atleast it works for me! If it doesn't for you, then maybe try a waterfall? ;)
      A shower is not the ONLY stressbuster!

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