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Expressions speak loud
Treading with silent words
Heart or broken egg shell
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Squint out of just birth
First blurred chicken vision
Bright life or butcher's knife
Words unsaid have a way to reach connected hearts, where as sometimes the same message communicated through words can lead to a broken heart!
Stepping out into this world, is best compared to walking on egg shells. We have no clue what is in store for us. A happy future or a painful end.
This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for the day is 'EGGSHELLS'.
*takes a bow* I have no words. I loved it. Completely. Heart or broken eggshells? Bright life or butcher's knife?
ReplyDeleteYou always finish your haiku with a bang! wonderful!
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Interesting thought Pranita and good expression :)
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I like both haiku, but I especially like the first one. "Treading with silent words" sounds very nice. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat picture.Broken hearts by silence.
ReplyDeletePranita...My first time here, and I am mesmerized...:)Impeccable set...!Though personally I liked the second one more:)
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery. I love the metaphors!
ReplyDeleteGood ideas!! Yes measured steps and an unknown future!! Well said. Love the quizzical expressions in both the Haiku!!
ReplyDeleteThe 2nd haiku is the best of lot...
ReplyDeleteAnd last line is just awesome
a really nice composition. I liked the first two lines a lot. Truly depicts the feelings!
ReplyDeleteThe sweet and sour of personal connections vividly described!
ReplyDeleteLove first one. Powerful use of words.
ReplyDeleteI pray for bright light !!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome haiku
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