Thursday, April 4, 2013

Lock your mind, lose the key! - Haiku 'D'

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Ditch the black monster
Emerald eyes lure but kill
Body survives, soul dies

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Dreaded green danger
Lock your mind, lose the key
Fearful drone, no music





That evil voice in your head that is so loud at times drowning your true inner voice can lead you to the darkest path of negativity. Beware of your senses. When the evil takes over, even basking in glory sends your soul plunging into an eternal pit of no return.



This Haiku is written for the April A2Z Heights at Haiku Heights. The prompt for the day is 'DRONE'.


16 comments:

  1. Wonderful take on the prompt! Very dramatic!

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  2. My mind was tired when I visited to read this haiku. I read it and ran away. I din't get a thing. :D
    After a half hour, I felt brave again and came back. insightful haiku! powerful. how lost we can be within ourselves.!! "eternal pit of no return"? *bows*
    i come here for the descriptions to be frank. You have this knack of explaining complex things in a simple way. Keep going!

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  3. Awesome.
    A little scary though. :P

    Nicely written. :)

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  4. Dramatic enemy of the soul beautifully described in these dramatic haiku!

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  5. Freaking spooky picture sets the tone there - love it

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  6. I found it pretty intriguing, Pranita...well done to have thought of this to use 'Drone'

    RS:)

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  7. I loved the pic, indeed close off your mind to ward off the evil forces of negativity. Well done.

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  8. I find it intriguing...You did well with 'drone'..unique take..

    RS:)

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  9. Like how you put it making the drone fearful and dreaded!!

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  10. So true Pranita...
    And yours is a different take...
    Enjoyed!

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  11. ewww.....that was scary!! Fantastic..

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  12. Very dark, very original take on the prompt! I'm scared!

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  13. a mixture of horror and drama :) great one!

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